Roamoak's registration

Subject: Roamoak's registration Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:08 pm

Name:Roamoak Hemora

World:Castle oblivion

Age:15

Gender:Male

Appearance:White hair with green eyes and usually wears a black shirt with white stripes.His nose is normal and he always wears glove because his hands get cold in the summer(Idk Question

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Weapon of Choice:Red short sword

Character History:From Birth he always had to brawl everywhere because his mother and father were killed from owe of debt.He just wanted to find a permanant place to stay.He had finally settle down in one place when he got in trouble again.He just couldn't fit in.He found a portal to castle oblivion and got lost at least he finnaly settled down.

Allignment:Netural

Rank:Private

Class:Mystic Knight

Subject: Re: Roamoak's registration Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:33 am

you should add alittle bit more to your appearance in my opinion.
then change your display picture to something that looks more like your character.
and is red short short the best description of your weapon you could give?
in your character's history, you make it sound like he's the bad luck child.
if he's supposed to be, add that. like say he is the symbol of bad luck. and add some of that to his appearance.
make him born on friday the thirteenth.
didn't mean to go all dictator namine on you, but those are just somethings i think needs to be improved.

please edit it and publish it again unless someone else says something.

link, riku.
don't make me look stupid (:

Subject: Re: Roamoak's registration Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:45 am

cepeda will make namine look stupid
the display pic isnt that important AND register your weapon in the weapon registration

Subject: Re: Roamoak's registration Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:42 pm

Namine- The Nobody* wrote:: you should add alittle bit more to your appearance in my opinion.
then change your display picture to something that looks more like your character.
and is red short short the best description of your weapon you could give?
in your character's history, you make it sound like he's the bad luck child.
if he's supposed to be, add that. like say he is the symbol of bad luck. and add some of that to his appearance.
make him born on friday the thirteenth.
didn't mean to go all dictator namine on you, but those are just somethings i think needs to be improved.

please edit it and publish it again unless someone else says something.

link, riku.
don't make me look stupid (:

agree add more appearance

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